Journey Reflection

Hello guys, how are you??



So yeah, I have finished my series JOURNEY (though I do not know why I titled it like thatπŸ˜…).  First, I would like to sum it up. So the poetry series is about a girl who turned out, had a crush on her bestfriend. And that girl was always on the side of him, comforting him, doing everything to make him happy. And one day, the boy had a break up, and the girl, as usual, she helped him, to find himself again, to get up, to move on. Yet when the boy was fine already, the girl who broke her heart returned and the boy, again willingly took her. And again, the main character was left alone with a broken heart. She was so hurt, with no one to comfort her and ease the pain enveloping her. But with those things, she found herself, the thing sleeping inside her, her passion, and she began to write. And that’s her journey, to be a poet. For all the world to see and  know the pain that she felt. 😁😁It ended the way I wanted it to be. And I hope I gave justice to the protagonist. But as I reread it again from the start, I found it so over acting and the pain was so exaggeratedπŸ˜…. Is it just me, or you think so too?πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚ well sorry for that. I am just so fond of the idea of pain that my writings reflect to it.πŸ˜…

And you might be wondering where the idea of this poetry came from. Well to clear it up, this is not based on my own experience, not entirely. πŸ˜‚ Well, truth saying, I was caught up in an unrequited love too. But I wasn’t that hurt really. Besides, I am still so young and have a long way to go. I have yet to learn more about romantic love..πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚β€



But here’s a simple advice from the advicing machine( atleast that’s what my friends call me πŸ˜‚though I just have but litle experience myself.) Guys, you are free not to read this if you  dont want to😁..



Pain comes along with love. We can never escape pain, it’s inevitable. They say, if you dont want to be hurt, then don’t love. How can we fight love when it hits us? How can we cease to love someone, to disregard our feelings when that feelings makes us happy in the first place? It’s okay to love, to give your all in love, to fight for love, as long as it makes you happy, as long as it spreads sweet smiles on your face, as long as it gives you hope, as long as it is still a good kind of love. Love as long as you can.  But bear this in mind, Love is a beautiful thing, yet it’s dangerous. It has its limits. If the good kind of love turned reversely, then you should stop, you must stop. If all love gives to you  are pain, hurt, frustration, problems, stress, then that’s not called loving.That is torturing. When that time comes, you should stop. Preserve yourself. Have pity for yourself. Wake up, get up, find your path, pray to God. Only you can save you. So don’t wait for someone to do save you. Turn the pain you feel into something worthy. Something productive, something that the world can get strength and inspiration from. Instead of being dark, broken and twisty, why not get a pen, and be a poet?



So yeah that’s it.. I hope that makes sense, and hope it can help..,πŸ˜…πŸ˜β˜Ί

And guys, if you have any ideas, suggestions, topics, for my next poem, or maybe series, just let me know in the comment box. Thank you😁😊☺

P.S. Spread the love people!!😊☺❀

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  1. Congrats on finishing your poetry series! And that’s great to hear that it went as you planned! I know exactly what you mean about rereading something and realizing it sounds different than when it was written. I definitely get that each time when I reread one of the drafts of my story haha… That sounds like a heart wrenching story and I am glad that the main character learns to find self expression through creativity, despite her heartbreak.

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    1. Yes, I was a bit embarrassed, or even anxious when I reread it.πŸ˜…πŸ˜… And yeah, I always believe that we can always find a way to pass through our problems, either be hearth break or just simple problems, when comfronted with those, why not just get a pen and write everything. You not just inspire people but your heart will lighten also..
      And thank you for your kind words. 😁Thank you

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